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          Can you do something for me, love?
          Why don't you just close your eyes?
          Breathe in, breathe out,
          Exhale all the lies.


          Take a minute in your busy day,
          Imagine all your problems far away.
          Take of the layers of hurt and pain,
          Then go out there and dance in the rain.
Hope this brightens your day. :heart:
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dully101 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Best thing I've read all day. Loved it.
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VioletRogue Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :3
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bedroom-inc Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student General Artist
This really does brighten someone's mood. :happybounce:
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:iconvioletrogue:
VioletRogue Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so glad. :hug:
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Spectra615 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome as always. Poems as simple as these can be very beautiful and touching. It always works :) :heart:
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VioletRogue Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :heart: Keeping it simple is a good thing to do. :)
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:iconspectra615:
Spectra615 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No prob.
Yep it is. :)
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:iconvioletrogue:
VioletRogue Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:meow: :hug:
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:iconspectra615:
Spectra615 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug:
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Razor13 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful.
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